the cold, flat desktop, a cool cloth placed on 30 sweaty heads and faces reddened with the racing games of 9-year-olds at recess.
Across the darkened room, rows of bowed heads on bent forms waited, silhouetted against the bright light of the windows, as teacher rustled through papers at her desk or her footsteps slipped out the door and trailed off down the hall, gathering things for class.
From beneath my elbow in the quiet room, I could see others’ eyes straining to find her, their cheeks firmly glued to the wonderfully cool slab. And one curious head, lifting and looking for a moment--before finding teacher’s eye and relaxing again onto the calming surface.
Until, with all rested and settled quietly to begin, she moved to the doorway and turned on the light.
Every head lifts and turns—
and follows her path around the room.
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25 comments:
I loved this Nina...just like the sunflowers that turn to follow the sun.
Nina, what a wonderful story from childhood and a glorious treat of sunflowers as well as the brilliant spiderweb to finish off.
Enlarging increases the magic at least tenfold.
What is so lovely as a field of sunflowers? The spider web is the perfect finishing touch.
You had me nodding to this one, in appreciation of the photos, and in memory of school days long past.
What a sweet memory. Today the children in our little city started school. Those were the days...
Great prose and imagery.
Nice photos, especially the dew on the spider web. those are not easy to photograph. well done.
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Troy and Martha
I love your stories and the way you imprint your poetry to simple, yet wonderful, moments.
I like how you have likened the bowed heads of the 4th graders to the heads of these sunflowers. Lovely post, and beautiful flowers.
Glorious sunflower pictures. It is amazing to see how they follow the sun.
fantastic flowers
Sydney - City and Suburbs
Nina--wonderful evocative story and great pairing with sunflower shots.
What an interesting way the teacher had of getting all of you calmed down and attentive to her.
beautiful story to go along with such wonderful photo's...It was as if the story was smiling! Thanks for sharing...Happy Friday! :)
I love nature. These are awesome.
A happy flower.
Lovely analogy! As a fourth-grade teacher I can certainly relate.
Lovely words to be tagged with lovely photos. Nice job!
jfm
Very nice analogy! Love the photography! Well done Nina!
What a glorious riot of sunflowers. I would have loved to have been there to take photos with you! Your writing is exquisite, too! Thank you for sharing.
Make me smiling....love the colors and the sunflowers as well
Have a nice SWF
Nina, I'm just blown away here admidst the office noises muffled in the background...suddenly I'm back in school with my head down, lights out.
Thanks. I needed a break.
You amaze me. This post is wonderful.
Mary
Amazing story and photos. Sunflowers are my favorite flower.
Love the last photo. It's just beautiful!
I remember heads down lights out. I wonder if they do it any more? Thanks for the memory.
That was a fun read. I remember it that way, too. Was so good.
Your photos are amazing and so inspiring.
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